Sunday, January 20, 2008

İn my opinion Turks can not be trusted with their own future because if we want to trust our future we should improve our education system and economy. In my opinion, this government must take measures these two problem otherwise Turks can not be trusted with their own future.

In my opinion education is the most important thing for development because education is the vision for one's eyes to see the world. Education encompasses teaching and learning specific skills, and also something less tangible but more profound: the imprt?ing of knowledge, positive judgment and well-developed wisdom.Education has as one of its fundamental aspects the imparting of culture from generation to generation .

The second important point is that economy. In recent years inflation rate has increases day by day and this situation is very dangerous for Turkısh people because high inflation rate means unemployment.People should work in order to earn Money and meet their needs otherwise they can not survive.,

Therefore we can conclude that;Government should taken measures in order to high inflation and education problem.If the new government can solve these two problem Turks can be trusted with their own future.

2 comments:

Sonja Tack said...

Burak,

Reading through this blog, I can see several examples of plagiarised text - that is, you copied another writer's sentences without giving credit. Please rewrite the blog in your own words.

Secondly, you have not referred to the Kinzer text, as was required by the assignment. Your answer must be based at least to some extent on the text.

Thank you.

burak dai said...

thanks for your critique ,

I wrote it again.