Wednesday, January 16, 2008
Aid to Africa
The people who live in Africa are living in bad situations.First, they need to have the basic services in order to live in the standard conditions.Africa is a undeveloped country.There is a huge starvation, also lack of education,lack of natural resources like water, and there is also one big problem , health. if a communicable disease appear in there the situation means that many people will die because of the disease, because there are unsufficient health services.Every year more than 1 million babies die in Africa and millions of women die because of pregnancy.Also majority of children do not go to school.But the most important problems are poverty and one of the results of poverty, hunger.There is a food dearth because they cannot get the nutritious food from nature, because there is not sufficient cultivable land.The neighbouring countries sell the food at the lowest coast.It is a minor solution for the hunger. I think the situation is awfully bad. The people are who have lost everything in the Africa.Actually some countries aid to Africa ,for instance, The Western's countries aid them, about water,food, medicament.Also the British aid,hundreds of children are in the primary school.However the aid's are not a solution for the Africa's situation.As a result. Africa needs a radical and permanent solution in order to devlope. Also the developed countries should carry on the aid to Africa.
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Thanks for writing your blog.
It's not too bad for the first attempt, but you should try to link the statistics and facts you give with the benefits of receiving aid. And check for basic language mistakes.
68% (borderline pass)
You still have time to rewrite this before 21st January if you'd like to try and increase your grade.
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