Monday, November 12, 2007
is poverty necessary?
Nowadays, everything is devoloping everyday; especially lackses things. If everything had been perfect, everyone would have been rich and world never need the improve. So that, pverty is the significant point about the techonolgy and world's grows up. Perfection is been by humans and always humans' are created by employees and bosses. Unless we want to stop the improve, we need poverty and employees.
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topic sentence is not clear and it doesn't linked other sentence. This blog could write better, because pverty, lackses don't semm be good for blog. Concluding sentence is clear ''Unless we want to stop the improve, we need poverty and employees.'' and it explain general idea of this blog.
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