Causes of poverty in Africa is important because all aid is not useful in African's people. While
West country could help to Africa. They should pay attention some problems that come on scene in societies. For insteance; If the aid is basic needs such as food,water etc.These needs should be chosen carefully.They causes some dieases for people and animals so this sitution is no aid for them. The aid could damage to society. The food that bring about dangerous dieases make different problems about health. I think that African's goverment should taken some measures for people and own society. Towards having favour from different country because allhelp actually is not really aid.
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