Sunday, November 25, 2007

Aid to Africa?

I think,stopping all aid to Africa couldn’t help to end poverty.Also,sending aid couldn’t solve the problem of poverty.So the most important question is,how could Africa end of the poverty?There are variable problems with sending aid to Africa.Western countries provide them to food aid.Because,Africans don’t supply enough food for themselves,they can’t do farming business in terms of.I think; Africa has good resources but they don’t use it because of their bad policy.They are depend on other countries policies.When war and political conflict will be ended,African farmers will be able to feed their socities and they will provide urgent food which African had need to. Thereby,the food problem will be removed.On the other hand,other factors have drastic role over the food aid.For instance;diseases;HIV/AIDS.It’s the most important problem of undevelopment countries.Africa don’t have any sources to keep peoples from diseases.HIV epidemic is the main reason of the scarcity of food. e.g.many African women incures the HIV epidemic and farming labour force is rely on womens’ working.So,it inflences the working force negatively by way. Consequently,if African government decrease the percentage of diseases death,it will help to improve the conditions of the poor.Furthermore the solution is,the government has to encorage Africans to being a sufficent people.They should provide education and trade possibility.

1 comment:

Sonja Tack said...

Evaluation
A. Good
B. Good
C. Good (but you should have divided your two paragraphs)
D. Satisfactory (further editing required)