Stopping aid to Africa will help Africa. But aid shouldn’t be stopped at once. Because their situation is awful now. But aid should be stopped in a near future. Because they are not starving because of economical problems. Because they don’t need economy. They don’t need money. They are used to live without money. They are peaceful with the nature. Only way to helping them is giving them their rights. Imperialists must give them their gold, diamond etc resources. UN, USA, UK, EU etc seems like helping them, crying them and praying them but it’s known that they don’t. Why should they? Germany is the leader country in Gold Exchange. UK is the leader in Precious Stone Exchange. They steal them from Africans. They have been using Africans as slaves for centuries. Every year more than 200.000 children from West Africa are kidnapped. Their prices are 8 pounds. Children from Benin, Togo and Mali are working for cacao companies. By the way those companies uses children for their advertisements. How cruel, dishonorable and shameless they are. By the way Animal Rights Fund’s budget is more than Slaves and Minority Fund’s budget. Worst part is so many African children are used as sex-slayers. I want to turn the subject. When they will start to live free they will solve the problems result from starvation and illness. It’s known that creator of HIV is soldiers of USA. They are millions of people who are killing themselves in Africa. Why? Because weapon producers want it. So simple. If there won’t be any terror, how they will sell guns? Aid must be stopped in a close future and Africans must get their rights. Like Massais blesses: ‘’Always be lonely!’’ Live Africa alone, live us alone!
ps: (I have ideas how to get rights but it will be so long to write. May be in next homework.)
http://www.bbc.co.uk/
http://www.time.com/
http://www.68dayanisma.org/
http://www.marxist.org/
http://www.socialismtoday.com/
disa.nu.ac.za
www.africaaid.org
Monday, November 26, 2007
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Evaluation
A. Good
B. Satisfactory
C. Poor (you cannot keep jumping from subject to subject within the same paragraph)
D. Satisfactory
Notes
1. Your style is very far from academic. Strong rhetoric and emotive statements are not appropriate in such writing. All assertions must be weighed up against available evidence.
thanks ms. tack for your comment. i hope i will write a better 'academical' paragraph/essay at next homework. thanks again
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