Monday, November 12, 2007

is poverty neccessary?

poverty is neccessary because of some people being rich and to be worked some people. people who are rich exploit poor people but these people are working more than poor people. therefore poverty is necessary.

3 comments:

melihozkan said...

blog was short, so it didn't explain main issue. Topic sentence was good and clear. He didn't give example so concluding sentence is not strong.

serdARTimur said...

ı believe that this paragraph don't have enough support sentence and example. Also ı can't find a difference between topic sentence and conclusion sentence.Both of them are same

Anonymous said...

like these paragrafhs couldn not tell the main think clearly becouse of inordenry idiom and lacknesses parts..first of all it his so short to acedemic paragrafh and it is could not tell clear ideas..above all this paragrafh has not enough examples, supporting ideas and coclusion part..