Our society consists of different types of people and classes.Each person reflect our culture.But there’s a huge diferences between these groups.We have to decrease poverty and try to make people more equal in terms of money.But the question is how to deal with this poverty and how to solve this problem,do we need serious effort and consideration?In my opinion there are several reasons or different factors that may help to solve this problem.
People have to deal with poverty,they have to need serious effort and performance.
At the beginning of centuries,there is an inequality between citizens.It has been altering the pattern of social inequality.Inequality between socities begin with economic substance to personal statues.Nobody wants to born with poverty.But,poor people think that if conditions aren’t suitable,there is no way to be survive.So,it influences the percentage of poverty.
In the societies, there are many different economical, political, civil statues.At the beginning of problem,comes the percentage of uneducated people.The government must solve this problem,they have to provide more opportunities people from their education.On the other hand,in some conditions, poverty is necessary.Only,I agree with Marshall in this situation.Because if there is no poor people, riches has no mean.Instead of Marshall’s think,riches may encourages poor people to work more.Riches can set a good example for them.
Consequently,in the world today,each country has similar problems with poverty.If countries help poor and show how they can improve themselves,they’ll help to decrease the percentage of poverty.In this way,with education,cooperation and more empathy,people can use their money better and use their knowledge more carefully to help others that are not as lucky as they are.So,people will contribute their socities.I think ,it’s not only their problem to be poor.It’s a problem in a country that we also live.
2 comments:
My topic sentence is: Our society consists of different types of people and classes..But there’s a huge diferences between these groups.We have to decrease poverty and try to make people more equal in terms of money. I think that it's clear.My first sentence gives the main idea and others are support this idea.On the other hand,other sentences are more specific than first sentence.
I am happy that you are capable of writing at length, but for the purposes of our blog, please limit your post to one well-structured paragraph. This will force you to tighten your argument and include only the most relevant details.
You do not really frame your response in a way that makes it easy for a reader to understand the topic and direction of your argument. You seem to assume that the reader is already familiar with the topic at hand. I think the majority of your response does not really address the main question: Is poverty necessary?
Work on making your writing more explicit and following the structure of a good paragraph. Try not to include a lot of irrelevant background that distracts the reader.
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