*We should fight against technology to protect our privacy because if we do not have privacy then we do not have freedom. ^Technology is improving in several sectors such as communication, military services, telecommunication etc. and we use technological materials every time and everywhere such as mobile phones. Mobile phones companies use the system that is called GPRS and all of them include this system that is used in navigation. Though, using this system is forbidden without permission, if some companies use it they can find us from our phones by using navigation and they can follow whoever they want. This means that we have no privacy. However, if it is used by the police or military to catch people who commit crimes or terrorists, it can be very sufficient and benefit because this system helps policemen to find them. >Thus, using technology should be balanced because when it uses for normal people like us without permission, it takes our privacy -our freedom-. Therefore it should be used for just specific, wanted people by military or police.
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-http://proposal.permanentpeace.org/
- http://www.ppionline.org/ppi_ci.cfm?knlgAreaID=124&subsecID=307&contentID=250070
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Dear Selahattin,
This paragraph is exactly the same as mine. I put that as an example for you to see. What you did was plagiarism. Please, re-write your paragraph using your own thoughts, ideas and examples in your own words.
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