I thınk Turks can be trusted their own future. They can believe that everything will be better than now.Turks are a special nation which had a lots of victory in their own lives.They got out a lot of adverse situations.
They have brave heart for that reason can’t afraid or escape anything else.Untill now, they used that brave heart and get rid from each adverse situations. For example , most of country did’t believe that Turkey would improved in industry, economi, healty, agriculture…But Turkey achieve all of these improvement and carry out its development every time.Thus, Turks belive their future will be better than now.Also they must belive ıf there is someone who don’t believe their future.There are many statment about Turkey future or live. According to the Kinzer text, ‘Turkey is kept in chains.For Turkey to live , devlet must die.’ I don’t agree this statement ‘ Devlet’ is a main blog that keep us on stand and protect us another caos on the subject of management.Also our management is so democratic as you can see in our parliement now. There are Kurds deputies who support PKK. Our devlet can support minorties right also.So there is a lot of illustrations that show devlet is necessary and useful for Turkey life and future.For that reasons Turks must believe and trusted their own future.
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Thanks for revising your blog post.
A few comments:
1. Your assertion that Turks have "brave hearts" is not strong enough to convince the reader. You need more concrete examples of how Turks have contributed to the development of their country. There were surely many other factors than just "brave hearts"!
2. I'm a little confused as to why you've mixed in the assignment on devlet here. It changes the focus of the paragraph and therefore makes it difficult to read and understand. The reader has no idea why you've made such a sudden jump. Remember that one paragraph ALWAYS equals one main idea.
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