Sunday, December 2, 2007
Can Turks be trusted with their own future?
Turks just cannot be trusted whit their own future.Because they MUST be trusted with their own future.At least if they want to last a couple centuries more.Turkey is a country which is struggling whit several problems more then the most.It has been like that in every age of history too.Especially on WW1.This nation had to slash through world of enemies to see the light of civilasation.But does it confirm that Turks can make their own decisions? Not really.Turkish people are detoriorated to be dictated.In fact they need this too.Without a leader they underestimate their own power because they dont know limits of it.But i think Turkish people are climbing the stairs one by one.But still couldnt reached the level required for true democracy so they still cannot be trusted whit their own.I think we need another great leader but this leader still didnt come up.And waiting is not an option,the clock is ticking,all the nation should act like one body,stick to each other,hand by hand,heart by heart and lead their own country if they want to remain.All the Turkish should be aware of the current status of Turkey.Thus and so,as Kinzer said; Turkey will astonish the world by becoming the most audaciously successful nation of the twenty-first century.
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Thanks for following the posting instructions precisely.
A few comments:
1. I am confused by your topic sentence. Doruk, please note the spelling of the word "WITH". What is your argument? That Turks can be trusted with their own future only if they manage to select another great leader? If so, the reader has to work hard to find this out.
2. Beware that this is academic writing, and as such you may NOT write sentences such as: "This nation had to slash through world of enemies to see the light of civilasation." In academic writing, this appears as extremely exaggerated, emotional and unprovable. Here's another: "And waiting is not an option,the clock is ticking,all the nation should act like one body,stick to each other,hand by hand,heart by heart and lead their own country if they want to remain." Can you see what I mean?
3. Your last sentence is plagiarised. You have actually quoted Kinzer, but the absence of quotation marks makes it appear to be a paraphrase, i.e. your own words.
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