Sunday, December 2, 2007
Can Turks be trusted with their own future?
Turks can be trusted with their own future. Since, educated Turks are more than before especially the young have different and creative ideas with using their intelligance and as Kinzer said,democracy has to be embraced fully although ruling elite believes all society doesn't mature and they are even justified.At first, general population may adapt this fully democratic order hardly, they may even make undue decisions. However, as time goes on, with testing themselves bias will be collapsed, society will be aware of how much power they have, their self-confidence will increase and they will decide more consciously. If you want one to learn swimming, you will throw overbroad, of course without leaving that one alone. This example is like what ruling elite have to do to save society from their inexperience. Ruling elite's thinking about being democratic and to tend to have a dogmatic system also create dilemma according to Kinzer, because of this developing is declerated. In conclusion, Turks, especially it's young can decide what is better for their country and what to do
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Thanks for following the posting instructions (although you should have highlighted your concluding sentence in a different colour).
Some suggestions:
1. Your first and second sentences need to be combined, but the sentence about Kinzer should be separate. What do you mean by "more than before"? This is vague.
2. Your topic sentence and supporting sentences express different ideas - why? The main idea is about allowing Turks to experience democracy and make their own mistakes, so this should be the topic sentence, or at least the two ideas should be linked.
3. "declerated" ?? This word doesn't exist.
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