We can trust our own future with logging to come today. As we have progressed since our republic occurs, we will go on progressing.
Our economy is improving that our companies could deal with other country's companies. Our money is gaining value day by day. We've many mineral resources to operate as boron that we got 70 percent in all world's resources.
As Kinzer said we are in an important geopolitical place and also a political place. The Bosphorus connects Europe and Asia, and it is also crossing point for trading. We come religious countries and democratic countries between. We are neighbour to petroleum resources that is no meaning to say its importance. These situations make Turkey to be made investments. An investment could force countries go on progressing to get more investment for being a modern country. Now we are a more educated society than before. We have intellectuals, scientists, doctors, teachers at world class. Our university number are increasing.
In the light of the foregoing, I look to the future hopefully. We have a great educated society to make their choices on their own , we do not need a ruling elite to make decisions in lieu of us because we are a democratic country that everyone has a chance to make decisions, if we have no chance to choice anything why do not we are ruled with autocracy or oligarchy?
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Thanks for revising your post.
A few comments:
1. I have no idea what your topic sentence means: "with logging?" Your topic sentence does not address the assignment question - it should explicitly answer the question.
2. "that is no meaning to say its importance" - ??
3. Very good and concrete examples of Turkey's development.
4. "if we have no chance to choice anything why do not we are ruled with autocracy or oligarchy?" - ??
Work on your topic sentence and rewriting unclear sentences.
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