Topic sentence is "If there would be any poor people,there wouldn't be wealth people".But I don't say anything such as this writing is interesting or examples were used in writing.Because there is only topic sentence.
topic sentence is "If there would be any poor people,there wouldn't be wealth people". This sentence isn't enough for writing. Also, there aren't supporting sentences and conclusion.
This paragraph has only one sentence and this sentence is topic sentence.But it is not enough for a paragragh.It needs supporting ideas and concluding sentence.
Topic sentence is "If there would be any poor people,there wouldn't be wealth people". However, this is not enough to write a well-organized paragraph because there is no supporting sentences.
you only wrote a topic sentence, there aren't any more information given to prove your topic sentence so I guess this is not a well written paragraph ..
the topic sentence:"If there would be any poor people,there wouldn't be wealth people". there isn't supporting and concluding sentence because there are only one sentence, it is topic sentence.
I think if you re-read Assignment 2 instructions and think about what we did in class, you will see that your paragraph is incomplete. As your classmates have pointed out, it contains only a topic sentence.
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Topic sentence is "If there would be any poor people,there wouldn't be wealth people".But I don't say anything such as this writing is interesting or examples were used in writing.Because there is only topic sentence.
topic sentence is "If there would be any poor people,there wouldn't be wealth people". This sentence isn't enough for writing. Also, there aren't supporting sentences and conclusion.
This paragraph has only one sentence and this sentence is topic sentence.But it is not enough for a paragragh.It needs supporting ideas and concluding sentence.
sometimes a sentence means everything. don't care the others, it's a clear and honestful 'paragraph'.
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you wrote a topic sentence but it isn't enough for an acedemic writing. It needs controlling ideas and supporting sentences also conclusion too..
Topic sentence is "If there would be any poor people,there wouldn't be wealth people". However, this is not enough to write a well-organized paragraph because there is no supporting sentences.
you only wrote a topic sentence, there aren't any more information given to prove your topic sentence so I guess this is not a well written paragraph ..
the topic sentence:"If there would be any poor people,there wouldn't be wealth people". there isn't supporting and concluding sentence because there are only one sentence, it is topic sentence.
I think if you re-read Assignment 2 instructions and think about what we did in class, you will see that your paragraph is incomplete. As your classmates have pointed out, it contains only a topic sentence.
this post include only a topic sentence. But there should be a supporting ideas and conclusion too.
ı haven't got internet due to the strike in puplic a compony:) and account of my blog has an issue so ı wrote only topic sentence:)
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