Wednesday, November 7, 2007

poverty is necessary

it is necessary because ıf there would be any poor people, there wouldn't be wealth people.

11 comments:

melike nur çoğalmış said...

Topic sentence is "If there would be any poor people,there wouldn't be wealth people".But I don't say anything such as this writing is interesting or examples were used in writing.Because there is only topic sentence.

Funda Karaca said...

topic sentence is "If there would be any poor people,there wouldn't be wealth people". This sentence isn't enough for writing. Also, there aren't supporting sentences and conclusion.

ahsen said...

This paragraph has only one sentence and this sentence is topic sentence.But it is not enough for a paragragh.It needs supporting ideas and concluding sentence.

Erdi Talimlier said...

sometimes a sentence means everything. don't care the others, it's a clear and honestful 'paragraph'.

bye...

goktug ozen said...

you wrote a topic sentence but it isn't enough for an acedemic writing. It needs controlling ideas and supporting sentences also conclusion too..

Selahattin Senol said...

Topic sentence is "If there would be any poor people,there wouldn't be wealth people". However, this is not enough to write a well-organized paragraph because there is no supporting sentences.

kjgh said...

you only wrote a topic sentence, there aren't any more information given to prove your topic sentence so I guess this is not a well written paragraph ..

Yusuf ELİK said...

the topic sentence:"If there would be any poor people,there wouldn't be wealth people". there isn't supporting and concluding sentence because there are only one sentence, it is topic sentence.

Sonja Tack said...

I think if you re-read Assignment 2 instructions and think about what we did in class, you will see that your paragraph is incomplete. As your classmates have pointed out, it contains only a topic sentence.

emirhan said...

this post include only a topic sentence. But there should be a supporting ideas and conclusion too.

selinturan said...

ı haven't got internet due to the strike in puplic a compony:) and account of my blog has an issue so ı wrote only topic sentence:)