Friday, December 7, 2007
Can Turks be trusted with their own future?
Turks can be trusted wıth their own future because Turks exchanged mainly than the past,now turks can differentiate that which is true or false for themselves.A lot of things changed in Turkey.Education is one of the most important thing for Turkey and our trade is improving day by day.Kinzer alluded somethings about this subject,secularism.Turkey is a muslim nation nevermore I believe that turkey is a secular nation.Therefore Turkey can have a place among the developed countries. In short,If turks choose good liders for themselves and for their future they can be trusted wıth their own future.
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Deniz, you've added your label but now you haven't highlighted your topic and concluding sentences...I have done it for you. Please pay close attention to all the posting instructions.
You also forgot your title...
A few comments:
1. I'm not quite clear about your topic sentence. Because your topic sentence is not clearly written, your paragraph appears to jump from point to point.
2. Turkey IS a secular nation; you've written "I believe..." Furthermore, Kinzer didn't "allude" to this, he stated it or mentioned it. You haven't shown a link between secularism and Turkey deserving to join developed nations.
3. What does "nevermore" mean?
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